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  • I’ll Cash Her Check In The Morning

    I’ll Cash Her Check In The Morning

    She shivers in the wind like the last leaf on a dying tree. I let her hear my footsteps.

    I rewatched the intro to Sin City, a movie that’s almost old enough to drink in the States. I remember it made quite an impression on me, back then. I’d rewatched it over and over, immersed myself in the gritty world, marveled at the art direction, the visual storytelling. I read the graphic novel, cover to cover. Then I forgot about it for years at a time.

    A random YouTube video brought it back, and I rewatched the intro. In it, Josh Hartnett’s character, revealed at the end to be a killer for hire, seduces and dispatches a woman in a red dress in under three minutes.

    As with many memories, I was hesitant to rewatch it, for fear it would turn out weaker than I remembered, spoiling my evening and soiling my memory.

    I was lucky. It held up great, in all its stylized, pulpy, fan-servicing glory. It’s the over-the-top narration for me, the quintessential expression of noir.

    Re-reading some narration from The Silent Season immediately after, I could see the echoes clearly. It’s as if the film and graphic novel had sat buried deep in my subconscious for twenty years, quietly guiding my fingers as I wrote narration and monologues.

    Does Silent Season Michael strive to show empathy to his targets because I thought that would be interesting, or is he channeling Josh Hartnett’s character from a film that’s twenty years old? Is there a difference?

    I wonder what other influences the editing process will unearth.

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  • I’ll Cash Her Check In The Morning

    I’ll Cash Her Check In The Morning

    Does Silent Season Michael strive to show empathy to his targets because he’s channeling Josh Hartnett’s character from Sin City? Is there a difference?

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  • On The Ethical Use of AI

    On The Ethical Use of AI

    At its worst, AI enables view farmers to make the world a worse place for everyone. At its best, it enables honest people to work harder.

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  • The Trouble With Excerpts

    The Trouble With Excerpts

    With the book done, and editing well on the way, it’s smooth sailing from here. Find excerpts, post them to social media, and watch that following grow. Right? Well, do I have a plot twist for you. For the past couple of weeks, I’ve been staring at my manuscript, trying to find some excerpts to…

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  • Very Meta

    Very Meta

    “Now you’re ready for battle, noble warrior,” she said, entering the makeshift shower. “I’ll clean myself under the waterfall. And then I will show you the secrets of my tribe. Terms and conditions apply.” I was reviewing a scene that had strong sexual undertones. Yes, the book contains sex scenes, as does the world. In…

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  • Everything dimmed

    Everything dimmed

    I waited to be almost 40 before starting my first novel. Having written novellas, stage plays, and short essays before, I thought I realized how daunting the scope of a full novel would be. I, in fact had no idea, I just thought I did. Still, I waited for the right time, when I’d have…

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  • Piece of Cake

    Piece of Cake

    (And other famous last words) I started writing The Silent Season from one idea that I found interesting: what if someone really enjoyed killing? Popular culture has a bunch of such characters, but one thing they all seem to have in common is some psychological condition that enables that. But what if that wasn’t the…

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  • Quotes

    Quotes

    I spent half of a day procrastinating with WordPress tweaks instead of editing the book. “Let it breathe,” I told myself. Finally, my technical skills prevailed, and I was able to get my way. On The Silent Season page, you’ll now find random quotes from the book, chosen at random from a curated pool, freshly…

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  • The Bleeding Persona

    The Bleeding Persona

    As I was re-reading a chapter to tighten the dialogue, remove extra adverbs, and other general cleanup, I noticed something surprising. Which feels weird to state, considering I was reading my own writing. A character’s backstory, hinted at within the chapter, shared a few beats with the protagonist’s. This had happened happened organically in the…

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