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I’ll Cash Her Check In The Morning
She shivers in the wind like the last leaf on a dying tree. I let her hear my footsteps.
I rewatched the intro to Sin City, a movie that’s almost old enough to drink in the States. I remember it made quite an impression on me, back then. I’d rewatched it over and over, immersed myself in the gritty world, marveled at the art direction, the visual storytelling. I read the graphic novel, cover to cover. Then I forgot about it for years at a time.
A random YouTube video brought it back, and I rewatched the intro. In it, Josh Hartnett’s character, revealed at the end to be a killer for hire, seduces and dispatches a woman in a red dress in under three minutes.
As with many memories, I was hesitant to rewatch it, for fear it would turn out weaker than I remembered, spoiling my evening and soiling my memory.
I was lucky. It held up great, in all its stylized, pulpy, fan-servicing glory. It’s the over-the-top narration for me, the quintessential expression of noir.
Re-reading some narration from The Silent Season immediately after, I could see the echoes clearly. It’s as if the film and graphic novel had sat buried deep in my subconscious for twenty years, quietly guiding my fingers as I wrote narration and monologues.
Does Silent Season Michael strive to show empathy to his targets because I thought that would be interesting, or is he channeling Josh Hartnett’s character from a film that’s twenty years old? Is there a difference?
I wonder what other influences the editing process will unearth.
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I’ll Cash Her Check In The Morning
Does Silent Season Michael strive to show empathy to his targets because he’s channeling Josh Hartnett’s character from Sin City? Is there a difference?
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On The Ethical Use of AI
At its worst, AI enables view farmers to make the world a worse place for everyone. At its best, it enables honest people to work harder.
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Very Meta
“Now you’re ready for battle, noble warrior,” she said, entering the makeshift shower. “I’ll clean myself under the waterfall. And then I will show you the secrets of my tribe. Terms and conditions apply.” I was reviewing a scene that had strong sexual undertones. Yes, the book contains sex scenes, as does the world. In…
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Everything dimmed
I waited to be almost 40 before starting my first novel. Having written novellas, stage plays, and short essays before, I thought I realized how daunting the scope of a full novel would be. I, in fact had no idea, I just thought I did. Still, I waited for the right time, when I’d have…
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Piece of Cake
(And other famous last words) I started writing The Silent Season from one idea that I found interesting: what if someone really enjoyed killing? Popular culture has a bunch of such characters, but one thing they all seem to have in common is some psychological condition that enables that. But what if that wasn’t the…
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Quotes
I spent half of a day procrastinating with WordPress tweaks instead of editing the book. “Let it breathe,” I told myself. Finally, my technical skills prevailed, and I was able to get my way. On The Silent Season page, you’ll now find random quotes from the book, chosen at random from a curated pool, freshly…
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The Bleeding Persona
As I was re-reading a chapter to tighten the dialogue, remove extra adverbs, and other general cleanup, I noticed something surprising. Which feels weird to state, considering I was reading my own writing. A character’s backstory, hinted at within the chapter, shared a few beats with the protagonist’s. This had happened happened organically in the…

